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The Edge of the World
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TheBrokenWanderer PM
Sort of suicidal hinting...about someone who just feels like no one cares anymore, and is falling off the edge of the world...not really caring if he makes it back or not...better than it sounds...please read and review
Rated: Fiction T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Words: 325 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12-23-04 - id: 1790445
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V1:

So many pathetic lies

Living deep in my gray eyes

Do you even realize

That I'm falling farther

I can barely recognize

My true self through my disguise

Do you even realize

That I'm falling off

C:

The edge of this world

There's nothing to grab hold of

All I can see is blackness

It's just too late

For me to stop

This descent of my creation

It's such an abomination

I guess everyone was right

To just let me fall

V2:

So many pathetic tries

To untangle the web of life

Do you even realize

That I've fallen farther

I can barely shed a tear to cry

I don't even want to try

Do you even realize

That I've fallen off of

C:

The edge of the world

There's nothing to grab on to

All I can see is blackness

It's just too late

For me to stop

This descent of my creation

It's such an abomination

I guess everyone was right

To just let me fall

B:

And in the darkness

As my mind slips away

I remember nothing

That I wanted to say

All the regrets

And all the sorrow

I'll never be able to pick up the pieces

No longer will there be a tomorrow to fall off

C:

The edge of the world

Where there's nothing to grab on to

All around me is suffocating blackness

It's just too late

I don't want to stop

This descent that I created

It's such a great affirmation

I'm glad that everyone

Just let me fall

V3:

Now I'm at peace

The darkness finally won

And I don't care if anyone notices

That I am dead and gone

The world will just pick up the pieces

And try to carry on

Oh well if no one remembers me

Because I am finally done

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