
Sort of suicidal hinting...about someone who just feels like no one cares anymore, and is falling off the edge of the world...not really caring if he makes it back or not...better than it sounds...please read and review
Rated: Fiction T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Words: 325 - Reviews: 4 - Favs: 1 - Published: 12-23-04 - id: 1790445
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V1:
So many pathetic lies
Living deep in my gray eyes
Do you even realize
That I'm falling farther
I can barely recognize
My true self through my disguise
Do you even realize
That I'm falling off
C:
The edge of this world
There's nothing to grab hold of
All I can see is blackness
It's just too late
For me to stop
This descent of my creation
It's such an abomination
I guess everyone was right
To just let me fall
V2:
So many pathetic tries
To untangle the web of life
Do you even realize
That I've fallen farther
I can barely shed a tear to cry
I don't even want to try
Do you even realize
That I've fallen off of
C:
The edge of the world
There's nothing to grab on to
All I can see is blackness
It's just too late
For me to stop
This descent of my creation
It's such an abomination
I guess everyone was right
To just let me fall
B:
And in the darkness
As my mind slips away
I remember nothing
That I wanted to say
All the regrets
And all the sorrow
I'll never be able to pick up the pieces
No longer will there be a tomorrow to fall off
C:The edge of the world
Where there's nothing to grab on to
All around me is suffocating blackness
It's just too late
I don't want to stop
This descent that I created
It's such a great affirmation
I'm glad that everyone
Just let me fall
V3:
Now I'm at peace
The darkness finally won
And I don't care if anyone notices
That I am dead and gone
The world will just pick up the pieces
And try to carry on
Oh well if no one remembers me
Because I am finally done
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