
| The Holy Scriptures of the Porcelain God
Author: eldrin Excerpts of short fiction and poetry on religious themes and the human nature to never look at more than one side of the story.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Spiritual - Chapters: 4 - Words: 1,658 - Reviews: 8 - Favs: 3 - Updated: 06-15-05 - Published: 01-07-05 - id: 1802621
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Mon Dieu!
Send me far,
give your cry for help
perhaps I will come.
You can leave me
and ignore my gift.
Return it to the witless.
Let those without a brain
ponder it's being,
as well as mine.
We search for an answer
that I once destroyed
that I once became,
I once hid,
and ruled from the clouds.
I plundered.
I spoiled.
I turned away.
Do you still seek me?
31 January 2005
In response:
r.p : Whoever you are, I sure hope that someday you will come back and review....
A.N.Schindlepipe: You are quite forgiven ) Re-reading your review is what made me want to get back in gear and get things typed up (I have started, more stories will come soon).
Flyingstarofdoom2: I think you may be one of my favorite reviewers ever. I thank you kindly for being one of those seemingly rare people who read a work and appreciate it for what it is even if you don't agree with what it says.
Thank you all, and may you continue to read and review!
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