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Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Angst - Reviews: 8 - Published: 01-09-05 - Updated: 01-09-05 - id:1804425

Harshest Critic

TaKe TwO

Today I saw the girl

I promise

I'll never be

That coward

Fleeing the fight

Will never be me

The stupid one who

Keeps quiet

When she should speak

Giving up so quickly

Worthless

How can she be so weak?

Watch her walk

Through the crowd

Thinking she's so hot

Conceited little pig

Stuffing her face

At the troth

Praying oh so holy

Knelling in the temple

See her farce

Smiling and caring

Belying a heart

Filthy and harsh

Today I saw her

What I promised

I'd never be

I saw her

In the mirror

Staring back at me



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