“Hold on! Don’t go Sasuke!! You mustn’t bring that scroll with you!” Shouted the old supervisor of the ancient ninja technique. I ran as fast as I can feeling my sweat crawling under my skin and my face. I had no other choice but to steal the ancient technique that was used by old Kimchi master. This technique was meant to be hidden forever in a cave and never again to be used by anyone especially a kid like me who haven’t got enough strong spirits and anxiety to do so. With my body that can’t resist a strong power like this, I could fatally get killed while I am doing it. I took the scroll not because I wanted the power, but it is the only way for me to kill the brutal Nasuke who had destroyed everything in the village and was left with ashes. The power is wanted among all the evils in this world and if it falls onto the wrong hands, everything would be destroyed. It will take me an extensive training for 2 years to master it and by that time, I will appear outside my cell and find that bastard.

Still finding my way through the old and unknown dark forest, I couldn’t find a perfect place for me to stay overnight. Everywhere I looked and turned, animals with gleaming eyes stared deeply in me. Even the trees moved silently at the corner of my eyes… Desperately searching for my temporary home, I spotted a perfect place. As I looked up from that spot, I can see the full moon reflecting the skies and hundreds of stars resting on its position. That night, I prepared some woods to keep me warm in the chilling air and some rocks for me to sleep on. I was trained in my school to survive in the wild and one of the training was to stay in a forest for 24 hours. My stomach started rumbling but I was way too tired to even move. Leaning against the hard soil surface, I looked up once more to see the moon, and my eye lids were forcefully closed.

Not realizing the dangerous risk Sasuke had taken and what will be lying ahead of him… the sequence will be continued

My first ever story that is published in fiction press ….. hope u people will review it cuz I really need some comment about my story. I don mind if it is a harsh comment, because I will learn from my mistakes  … and if I get more than 5 reviews, I’ll make more chapters