Author's Note: My first attempt at a poem with three-line verses, andalliteration. Rather miserable in my opinion, and classsified undermy "not-so-good"category of do you think? Leave a review please. Thank you!

Sweet Surrender

A silent dawn reveals
A shimmering splendour of gold
We arise for Sabbath

The scintillating afternoon rain
Like a sparkling shower of spangles
Seamless reflection of sunshine

We stroll on the stone pavement.
Dance of the intertwined shadows.
Shyness thrown off; serenity settles

Water elements strip us bare
Secret desires are shown
And slowly become sovereign

The serenade of the sweeping rain
Lulls our senses in such surrealness
Savouring glistening cherry lips

We stand on the streets
Surrendering sweetened kisses
Until a scarlet dusk appears