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. This
poem I am debating whether to turn it into a trilogy of poems or
smash it
all into one big poem and also the name. I don't know if
I want the 3
or 1 poem(s) to be attached to Nightingale since it
is a basically a
continuation or if I want it to have it's own
identity. either way
I’d like some feed back as to the name I
guess
Sunset of an Angel V#2/ Nightingale Duex V#2
I have been displaced from comfort
No longer do I feel at home
Within my own
These sunsets we promised
That would never set
Fell the moment we parted
These three years past
And it’s a lie to say
I still don’t miss you every day
I’ve stopped coming home
Because every time
You’re still gone
And I’m left with an empty heart
An every time I write about you
Your figure is always turned into an angel
No matter what I say
You always turn out perfect
But I don’t want you perfect
I want you to be human
If our sunset had never come
And these raindrops on the window
Stopped bringing back your tears
Could I tear myself away
Feel the nothing I did
Before I ever touched your hand
I’ll linger over the years
Waiting for your
On these cold rainy days
I know you hate
Hoping to see you running
Through the mist
Still you never come
And I can’t sit forever
(Standing in the door way you’ve closed)
I try to convince myself
Everything is fine
(It was always a lie)
When I felt nothing for life
(Except for when I was with you)
And I know how sorry we both are
For leaving without ever saying good bye
Without ever exploring what could have been
(Who remembers who the most)
You were once my nightingale
(Now just an angel in my dreams)
You were always my muse
(Don’t you know…I stole all my inspiration from you)
I’ve come to realize without you I’m nothing
(Just a shell no golden word shall ever flow)
Not even the blood of angels could replace you
Now the seasons of changed
You’ve returned to the state
Of sunsets in orange
And clear skies
Where the Penn weather
Drags you down no longer
A Florida Angel
And I’d change it all
If you’d just promise
To come back home
And never leave again
Because every time you leave me
I lose all trust in time
Blending together in the sunset
I lost you in.