Acid Rain

I want you
You want me
Isn't that the way
It's supposed to be
My heart it aches
From all the pain
My tears now fall
Like acid rain
I sit in the dark
Away from the light
No longer afraid
Of the deep, dark night
A heart betrayed
My heart is beat
My heart is dead
Ice-chilled meat

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