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11:53
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I wrote this song at a wake yesterday. I was bored, and there wasn't much I could do. It isn't much, but please review.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance - Words: 128 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 02-26-05 - Status: Complete - id: 1844545
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11:53

Tonight it feels different
No echoed voices
No haunting memories
My heart's not breaking now

Chorus 1:
There's no love tonight
It doesn't hurt
At last I'm free
And I'm glad
There's only silence
It doesn't matter
At last I'm free
I can breathe

The breeze feels different
No voices in the wind
No icy breathing
My thoughts are surfacing

(Repeat Chorus 1)

The air feels different
The dawn will soon be coming
The moon's still out there
But I can still hear the soft humming

Chorus 2:
There's no love tonight
But still it hurts
There's no longer the silence
But it doesn't matter
I'm not free
And I can't breathe

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