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Author: fizzygila
Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Tragedy - Reviews: 3 - Published: 02-28-05 - Updated: 02-28-05 - id:1846319

You were the one who touched my hand
Gave me confidence to do what I can
I’ve never feared, being with you
And that innocent smile shines upon me

The next day… I felt odd
Something was wrong.. but I couldn’t tell
I got a phone call, my heart stopped
Hands were sweating…. What’s happening?

I sprinted against the strapping wind
Droplets of rain slowly drip from my shoulder
I don’t want to regret, cuz I’m not loosing you
Just hang in there …. for a little while

Gasping for air, mind discouraged
You were lying there…unspoken
Eyes were shut, lips were frozen
My heart stopped once again, numb…

My footsteps, left puddles trailing behind
I was soaked to the bone, just to see you
I don’t want to believe, is not true
You can’t just leave me here…u just can’t….

Hands firmly clutching on your chest,
You were still breathing, not for a long
Last word that you’ve said, was breathless
Just the word “thank you” that I could hear

Plz review... i donno if the ending was good ... maybe i should've continued but it might get borin or something... cuz u can just imagine how to lose a friend.!! hope u guys like it!



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