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Author: ElvenCrystaline
Fiction Rated: M - English - Spiritual/Supernatural - Reviews: 7 - Published: 03-01-05 - Updated: 06-30-07 - id:1847523

I feel limp, helpless, motionless

Fatigued

The world spins, around, so dizzy

I careen

Confusion, sensation, numbing

Oh please!

Falling, diving, sinking

I see

Silence, speechless, thoughtless

Help me!

Feeling, catching, steadying

I breathe

I thought of all of these when I had almost blacked out twice in one day. It pretty much summed up all of my feelings and thoughts before I caught myself from hitting the floor.


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