Author: Underestimated PM
Complete Shaylee has a promising career lined up. While attending a party thrown by a prestigious man in the horse industry a burglary takes place. One of the masked men decides Shay would be the perfect bride. And she has no say in the matter.Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Suspense - Chapters: 21 - Words: 60,225 - Reviews: 159 - Favs: 133 - Follows: 13 - Updated: 04-23-05 - Published: 03-10-05 - Status: Complete - id: 1855692
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I want to thank everyone that reviewed first off. You have no idea just how much your reviews meant to me. They kept me writing and feeling confident with my story line. I know this wasn't the best written story, but I am pretty darned proud of it! Lol. It's the first story I've ever completed the whole way, and your reviews are partially, okay, mostly to thank for that.
Kira- I'm glad you like the story. Thanks so much for reviewing all the way through!
Sun Chime- Thanks for the support and the input. I will have more stories in the future! Look out for them.
Princcess JoJo- Glad you like my bluntness, scares some people though!
Taryn W- I love your name, not many people have it, but that makes it all the more special! I love what it means too! Thanks for reviewing!
Skeptic-Critic- Welcome for updating so quick, sorry that it was short, but I'm glad you loved it!
AngelOnTheEdge- Thanks for reading the story and sorry it wasn't longer!
Sam- You already know how grateful I am for your help! Lol. Especially in writing the one chapter. And for listening to me ramble on and on at school. Not like listening to Mrs. G was any more fun, but thanks all the same! :) ttyl.
monadoll- Aha! Someone with my kind of view on life! Gotsta have humor! Lol. Sorry about the disappointment. But thank you so much for pointing out some things that I would have looked over.
Sarah- Thanks for the reviews. I loved the fact that you included so much info in them. They helped a ton!
Blachama617- Sorry, about the not explaining part.
Katy- Thanks for the reviews. Made me laugh!
hopes4love- I loved your reviews, I was always curious as to what you'd think of the chapters!
rosetintedglasses- Thanks for the support all the way through the story. I always looked forward to what you had to say!
brokenangel- Thanks for the review!
psycho88- Thanks for reviewing. I wasn't too sure what people were going to think about it being close to Sabine Woman. I personally didn't think it was. I was glad someone else thought so, proving that I'm not too crazy!
Krystal Nickle- Thanks for the multiple reviews! And hey, keep Ice Queen going I'm really enjoying it!
Jabber Jaws- I'm glad you think the story was interesting! I love hearing that people like my work!
sugarbarbie- Thanks for taking the time to review! It means a lot!
Penny- Your reviews did my heart good, especially when I wasn't all too sure about my writing. Thanks a million for the support!
Anonymous- Thanks a ton for reviewing.
Gullablehorselvr- I loved talking with you!
Allison- I'm glad someone told me when to get my butt in gear to keep the plot interesting! Thanks! :)
No Life- Thanks much for the reviews!
Yv- Thanks for the reviews and for pointing out some similarities. I hope Captured turned out better though! Lol.
unbridledfear- I loved the informative reviews! They helped me with some small editing. Lol. I'm really glad you loved the story!
Garnet-earth-Princess- Thanks for the review and support!
Katsiebee- Thanks for the support through the whole story! It helped keep me going when I hit some writer's block!
Esquirella- Hope it was interesting enough to keep you reading! Lol.
LivinInSublime- Thanks so much for the prayers. Everything worked out and life goes on. Thanks so much for reviewing and reading my story. It's always so great to just know another Christian author.
Rose- Thanks for the review! :) I love it too. Lol.
do- Glad ya think it's cool!
rae- Thankys much!
fallen angel broken wings- I don't know if you can love this story as much as I do, but I'm ecstatic that you do! Lol.
Summas Angellove- I appreciate the review, I'm glad you love it!
x DREAMS IN EXILE- Ha! I know! I did my best to make Coby sound delicious! Lol. Couldn't have put it better myself!
ImaginarySuperstar- I'm really really glad you liked my story! Thanks!
Thank you all so much for reviewing! And thanks anyone who reviews after I post this! Lol. Your reviews make my day!
I said something in an earlier chapter about a sequel. Well I didn't get much feed back on that idea, so I'm guessing I shouldn't write one. If you think differently please let me know so I can begin formulating a plan! Otherwise I'm starting a different story!
Anyway. I'm really glad to have this story done. I had so much fun writing it, but I was putting a lot of time into it. And I was getting to the point where I needed to choose between school work and making the story drag out for another twenty chapters. I didn't think I could keep everyone interested that long and I needed to actually spend some time on my math homework to understand it. (Sam, keep your mouth SHUT! Lol) But, um, anywho.
Though I'm glad that I'm finished writing, I'm really gonna miss it. I mean, I have so much free time now. Though, I do have five horses to train and the summer show season is coming up… but really, no big deal…-yeah right I wish-.
Do you have any idea how long it takes for 59 pages to print? A looooooonnnnnnnnnnngggggggggg time. Lol.
Okay, um, if enough people want a sequel here's basically what it would be about. It wouldn't be about Shay and Coby, it would be about Taryn and her life. Here's a tentative summery-
Taryn Ann Michelle Eldridge wants to be the top of her class and eventually head the rebellion by being the caption of the intelligence team. Ever since she was little she had loved being in control and could easily organize large, complicated plots, much to her parents amusement and sometimes the end of their rope. Everything's going as planned, until one person forces her to make a choice that she doesn't want to have to make. Ever. Continue single mindedly striving for the top while pushing everything else, save her horse, out of the picture. Or let just one person inside her shell. One decision could make or break her dream career. Should she continue for her lifelong dream, or make room for a new one?
Pretty please let me know, honestly and clearly, what ya'll want to happen. If I don't write the sequel I'm going to write this story-
Raidaleigh Rose Belle is the eighteen (almost nineteen) year old daughter of Jared Belle, a candidate running for President of the United Sates of America. She's a total rodeo buff and owns possibly the fastest horse on the circuit. After winning a local rodeo a college friend of her brother offers her a proposition she can't refuse. Establish a barrel racing breeding and showing operation and make a big name for the company. Prize- half ownership in a prospering establishment. Of course she jumps on the offer. It comes complete with a big, loveable, emotionally scarred cowboy and horses. It's perfect. She gets to test her wings in the business world with a career she loves. And even though her partner is incredibly good looking, there won't be a problem with falling for him, since in the past a woman tore his heart in pieces, leaving him wary of women. So, even if she did fall for him, which she wouldn't, there was no danger. Right?
Either way I'm hoping to post this one, though I have no idea what the title will be. But I need to know what you guys want to read. I'm not gonna post something people don't like or care about, that would be stupid. (don't you dare say anything, just because I'm blonde…) lol. Feed back is always nice.
So um, thanks again everyone that reviewed! And please tell me which story you want to have written next! If anyone wants to talk about anything e-mail at . That includes just chatting or yelling at me or whatever! Lol. Bye guys, hope to hear from ya'll!