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Hi! It's yinyang-shadow. I hope y'all like this poem! If you do, plz review! If you don't...well, plz review anyway and tell me what I can do to make it better! Heck, I might even rewrite it just for you!
At the end of the day
When the sun goes down
I smile to the oncoming darkness.
It sneaks into my room,
Streaking through the windows,
Crawling under the door,
Billowing in,
Filling every nook and cranny
Until my room is black
And I can't see a thing.
I lay in my bed,
Snuggled close into the covers,
Quite content with the darkness of the mind,
For in this darkness,
There is nothing to stop you
From being by my side.
The distance that seperated us
Disappears when the lights go down,
For I am alone,
In the dark,
Where anything can happen.
It's easiest to hide
Form everything that haunts you
When you can't see your fears
And they can't see you.
It's easiest to bring back the ones that you love
When there's no one to tell you,
"Stop dreaming, they're gone."
It's easiest to listen,
To think,
To dream,
When your senses are opened
To the impossibility of the night.
I can imagine you're here,
Snuggled by my side,
Like that cold night we went camping
In the mountains up north.
You can whisper my name,
Telling me that you'll never leave me again,
Like you always used to.
You can hold me in your arms,
And I can feel your warmth,
And you and I can be sisters,
Like we were before.
I can fall asleep
In your loving arms,
Without a worry or care,
A problem or fear.
And then, when I wake
In the early hours of the morning
To find you gone again,
I can squint through the darkness
To look at your picture,
Barely making out
Your face,
And then,
In the dark
I can cry.
For it's easiest to cry
When no one can see you
Or hear you
Or know
That you're not really as storng
As you wish you could be.
And no one but you
Will ever have to know
Why I love the night.
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So? Whadya think? Good? Bad? Stupid? Perfect? Terrible? Let me know, plz, and I'll give you a cookie, when I review you!