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First of all, thank you to Mettie, Nelson Wells, Nobody-n-Particular, Luneko, and Unfavorite Child. I had a rough day and seeing your reviews really made things a lot better. I'd especially like to thank Luneko for being such a faithful reviewer. I really appreciate it! Thank you also to Nelson Wells for putting me onyour favorite list. And both Luneko and Mettie deserve a shout out for their excellent contructive criticism. :)
Here it is: a little poem about the "somewhere" inside my mind where my dreams take flight.
Somewhere far beyond the stars,
Within the reaches of my mind,
There dwells a land beyond compare
That only I can find.
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My heart is never lonely there,
Yet no one’s there but me.
No standards weigh or tie me down.
There I can simply be.
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A land where magic’s truly real,
Where dreams always come true,
There I can be as wise as time
Yet still be young and new.
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It has no name and needs one not,
For then it can’t be real
And then my dreams would slowly die,
With nowhere to appeal.