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In reading Othello i was drawn to the line "i am not what i am", Iago
(1.1.67). Iago is not what he appears to be, and niether am i, nor is
anyone i have ever met truly what they appear to be. I find that
facinating and it inspired me. I wrote this little bit of nothing on
a bus after reading Othello. Please review.
I am not what I am
All is not as it appears to be
This face of foolish fancy
Is that alone, a face
A painted mask of revelry
Red lips, rouged cheeks
A smile for all
And reality for none
This vision, the one seen
The light, the sequin, the glitter being
A grand and false design
Hear me now, hear what I say
All before you is an act
A circus of color, a dazzling sight
Come too close and beware
For then you’ll see
Cracks in the paint that covers me
A charade that hides all-
Curtains over my life
This show would close and reveal,
The reality
If the world were ready for the true me