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Author: Mina in Blue
Fiction Rated: T - English - General/Fantasy - Reviews: 1 - Published: 04-03-05 - Updated: 04-03-05 - id:1876768

Strange ecstasy, in music;

a touch of gloved fingers

as the unfettered bass growls in excitement.

A screaming string,

answered by a screaming voice,

lips pressed to a microphone.

A touch of love, in cords,

across a sweating cheek,

like fire across water.

You touched me once,

and I reacted in song.

You sang your fire rite;

I played for you.

A note raged across lovers without faces,

swirling in the dark.

They dance and cry in a sea of themselves.

But for a moment,

we forgot our ocean of bodies,

who belonged to us through longing,

and we lost each other to love,

lust,

and the strange ecstasy in music.


This was wrtten after I saw Something Corporate, Reel Big Fish, Carbon Leaf, Adlyn, and some other great bands in a giant concert at Longwood University in Farmville, VA (Yeah, I know, there really is such a place, it's about an hour west of Richmond, off of 360. If you don't believe me, check out a VA map, I swear it's a real place. They sell a lot of very nice furniture there and there's a college there. The population doubles during school months). I don't know why, but when I reread it, it reminds me of the band Orgy in the music video for Dreams in Digital. ::shrugs:: However you guys see it, I guess.

Mina



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