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Author: Eyes of Amethyst
Fiction Rated: K - English - General/Drama - Reviews: 4 - Published: 04-04-05 - Updated: 04-04-05 - id:1876916

Hi! I've been trying to get to work on my story Lunar Chaos, but I'm stuck in a world many call writer's block. So, I decided to post this crappy poem I made a few months ago. It may not seem much, but I do hope it doesn't suck as bad as I believe.

It may seem weird and all, but this idea had been swimming in my head a year ago, and only after months have past had I decided to write it, and another few months before I decided to post it. It definitely isn't my best work, but I AM only a mere fourteen year old girl whose shielded from the harsh reality called life. Sure I have my bad moments, but doesn't everyone? Yet because of this I cannot fully convey what I wish to say, especially if it is related to sadness. I've never felt such a deep emotion, and I hope you understand.

Oh well, enough of my rambling. Here's the poem! Remember to drop a comment or so. Constructive criticism is welcome.


CAMERA LENS
by: Luminous Moonflower

From where I stood outside her gates

I see her graceful form

Her thoughts amidst with folded arms

She viewed the place from where she’s born

Dark silky locks that frame her face

Such length of hair a rarity

Eyes of brown, so strong yet weak

So filled with child-like purity

Height not so tall, yet not so short

Her skin so pale yet fair

A normal nose and two ears at side

Rosy lips not many shared

An aura of pure innocence

So rare for a woman her age

Shielded from the world she was

Trapped inside an unseen cage

Never to experience hurt

This I noted down

I also knew, despite her smile

Deep inside she wore a frown

For she could never live like me

One who’s free to fly away

To anywhere I wished to be

Free to voice the things I say

And now as tears slowly fall

From the fallen angel’s eyes

I cannot help but tear as well

Seeing her soul fall in demise

But when I see strong sets of arms

All seems bittersweet I sense

In the arms of her lover I sigh sadly and look

Watching her bliss from my camera lens


Thank you for reading! )



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