Hey! So, this is a totally revised version of Falling in London. Thanks to all of those who reviewed with CONSTRUCTIVE criticism, and to those who just flamed: I KNOW it sucked. But can you please be a little nicer? That story was, like, one of my first stories. I’m still learning.

Well, I decided to totally change a bunch of stuff in the story. The basic story is the same, ya know, with the band going to London, but the band is all girls and I think I’m totally changing the love interest’s personality and life.

The style of writing that I am going to use (telling the story through e-mails, I.M., journals, PDA’s, etc.) belongs to Meg Cabot’s adult romance novels (Boy Meets Girl, The Boy Next Door, and Every Boy’s Got One).

And despite ilovejohnnyd making most of the e-mails in this chap, californiaangel is the main character. She will get more parts, it just worked out that ilovejohnny could send a lot of e-mails this chap.

Okay, last time I posted the revised version, you couldn’t see the e-mails. So this time I’m not putting the .coms or .nets or whatever. So please just ignore the fact that there are no endings to the e-mails. I did it so you could see who was e-mailing who.

Thanks!

Falling In London

Chapter I

To: californiaangelearthlink

From: ilovejohnnydyahoo

Re: OMG!!!!

Jen-

CAN YOU BELIEVE IT?! WE’RE GOING TO LONDON!!! WE’RE REALLY GOING!!!!!

Okay, calm. Breathe…Aw, screw it.

Did you ever imagine that a record company would offer us a record deal?! This is soooo awesome. Our first trip out of the country…well, except for you, of course. But you’ve only left the continental U.S. once.

We have to go shopping. I mean, we have to look good for all those hot British guys! How’s Saturday?

Meg

To: ilovejohnnydyahoo

From: californiaangelearthlink

Re: OMG!!!!

Wow, Meg, you need to cool down or you’re gonna have a heart attack. Lol. I mean, yeah, I’m excited, but seriously…breathe….

Yeah, of course we need to shop. 2 ok?

Jen

To: californiaangelearthlink

From: ilovejohnnydyahoo

Re: OMG!!!!

Yup, that’s fine. I’ll e-mail the girls.

Meg

To: guitarsrockaol;catwomanyahoo; fallingangelaol

From: ilovejohnnydyahoo

Re: London

Hey guys!!!

Wow, be glad I didn’t e-mail you when I was freaking out. Just ask Jen. It was scary.

Anyway, mall on Saturday. 2. Be there or else.

Meg.

To: ilovejohnnydyahoo

From: fallingangelaol

Re: London

Which mall? This is L.A., stupid. There’s about 10 malls within a 30 minute drive radius.

Cat

P.S. – you really need to change your e-mail. I mean, for Bob’s sake, the man is over 40 years old, and you’re 21. And anyway, he looks freaky in the trailers for that new Willy Wonka movie.

To: guitarsrockaol; catwomanyahoo;fallingangelaol; californiaangelearthlink

From: ilovejohnnydyahoo

Re: which mall

Downtown Burbank

See ya tomorrow!!

Meg

P.S. – So what? A girl can still dream, right? And he only looks freaky because he is playing a thouroughly weird character. It’s not his fault.

P.P.S. – And you need to stop saying for Bob’s sake, Cat. I mean, I’m sure when Douglas Adams wrote Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy he did not mean for people to use that saying. Bob was a fictional god that those island people worshipped.

P.P.P.S. – Hey, do you think Johnny will go on a trip to London while we’re there? I mean, he’s close – France. What about Orlando? Think he’ll be in the same area?

To: ilovejohnnydyahoo

From: californiaangelearthlink

Re: which mall

Meg-

You need to calm yourself. No, I do not think Johnny will make a trip to London. He has two kids and a wife. And I highly doubt he or Orlando will even be near England. They’re both shooting movies.

Cat, leave Meg alone about her unhealthy obsession with Johnny Depp. And Meg, leave Cat alone about her odd sayings stolen from Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy.

Mommy Jen

P.S. – heehee

So, did you like it? Please review!!!!