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Author: Jewel of Arabia
Fiction Rated: K - English - Poetry/Spiritual - Reviews: 3 - Published: 04-10-05 - Updated: 04-10-05 - id:1882627

Hi guys...I normally write fanfiction not original fiction (well I write a ton of that but I intend to publish it so I'm not putting it on this site), so anyway this is a random thing I came up with after I read a National Geographic article (or maybe Internet...)

Rain falls down

Falls down

Shimmering colors

Splashing the earth

Hands thrown to the sky

Gazing

Gazing

Turning slowly

Eyes closed

Bowing to the waterfall

He climbs back

Into the trees

This is inspired by reading about the “waterfall dances” that some alpha-male apes (usually chimpanzees or orangutans) will do and that appears to have some kind of religious significance.

Please tell me what you think! :D

Jewel of Arabia



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