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Author: Mlle. Daae
Fiction Rated: K - English - Drama/General - Reviews: 1 - Published: 04-20-05 - Updated: 04-20-05 - id:1891477

Paradise…written on April 20, 2005

What does a place need to become a Paradise?

The fiery sun sets over the calm, blue sea.

You hold your love close as you watch the sunset.

Behind you, the forest sways in the light breeze, the tree’s lush, green leaves bringing a vibrant touch of color to them.

Slow, fresh streams run through the trees, dodging and dipping, running to meet the ocean.

A crackling fire glows to your right, and all who you care for sit around it, beckoning you towards it.

You squeeze your lover’s hand and walk through the sand, squishing your toes around it.

And as you join them before the fire, you think

What more does this place need to become a Paradise?



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