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Author: Crazy In 88
Fiction Rated: M - English - Adventure/Drama - Reviews: 4 - Published: 05-26-05 - Updated: 09-17-05 - id:1922944

Authors Note: Okay. Totally new work. PLEASE do the best you can to avoid saying this reminds you of Candy and Violence. It's new. My favorite thing about it is...well, I'll say it at the end. But, yeah. Looking at this, I'm thinking 50's, 60's? Not sure, because I am cursed with a directors mind and that means I don't know my settings for sure until it's in production, you know, when I'm looking at anywhere from $750,000 to $2 million. I can't be a bitch about this one with all the threats and shit, cause guess what? It's not legally protected under my real name. In fact, I just started on it last night. It's a script, so, even though I'll be better on this one than Candy and Violence, don't expect me to update every other day. At least not until we're deep into summer, and even then because I'm looking for work and in July I will be in summer school. So, yeah. I update when I update. Sorry. But hey, now I'm gonna shut up so you can read what I have. This is ALL I have for now, seriously. I crashed afterward, it was like 2:00 AM. Enjoy.

Hellcat

CANDY SHOP, EXT, DAY

Birds-eye-view shot

Suze- a gittery nineteen year old is walking around and outdoor candy store. There are, interestingly, several bandages around the same spot on her arm. She walks away with a bag full of candy.

Cut to-

Suze in her hotel. She's almost pothetic, sitting there, shooting up. With a sniffle, she leans back, high as a kite. She opens her hands with gittery hands and begins to eat. She stops, seeing someone in front of her and holding a gun at them, wide eyed and afraid. We don't see the person she's aiming at.

DRAGON KIM

Well hello there!

A gun goes off, fade to black.

credits

DRAGON KIM'S PLACE, INT, NIGHT

DRAGON KIM is peacefully laying down on her couch, eating chinese. We see five assassins (three male, two female) walk up and sneak into her house. They make their way into the room where she is. She sits up.

DRAGON KIM

Well what the fuck?

One guy, armed with a gun, shoots. She jumps above the shot and goes for his eyes with her chopsticks. One of the girls, armed with a chain, attacks. Dragon Kim reaches around her chain with the chopsticks, swings it around and goes for the girls stomach in a stab, then withdraws. The last three, one armed with a sword, the other a pair of sai's, the last a whip and kunai (AKI), attack almost simutaniously. She ducks beneath the sword and sai attack, kicks the sword fighter and disarms him, disarms and kills the sai'd fighter, who is doing a double spinning horizontal attack, all the while evading Aki. She ducks the chain again, then does a horizontal attack. Aki entangles the weapons. She then lets the weapon glide over her waist and neck as she swings the edged end of the weapon at Kim. Kim jumps above it and as she lands she grabs the weapon and slashes wildly using both ends of the weapon. Aki tries to block and disarm. Dragon Kim entangles both of her hands in the whip, then holds the kunai at her neck between both hands.

DRAGON KIM

Why Aki?

AKI

You killed Suze. We're just the start of things.

DRAGON KIM

Goodbye.

Dragon im inserts the weapon into Aki's neck in a quick thrust and as she does we immediately cut to

ADOLPH'S APARTMENT, INT, DAY

(This is after she.. I'll update this when I get there, but this isn't happening when it appears to be.)

KOU and ADOLPH are sitting down talking.

ADOLPH

I called you here because I had to talk to you. Your little hellcat killed my Suze.

KOU

She would do that.

ADOLPH

I need her found and brought to me. She fucked with Suze, she fucked with us. We will no longer be her team, but her enemy. Dead or alive, I don't care.

KOU

I understand, but how can I help.

ADOLPH

I just wanted to let you know what to expect for your sweetheart. So I'm not so heartless. And, in case you wanted to save her ass, you could do something heroic.

KOU

Well, I will do my best.

ROAD, EXT, DAY

(This is right after she kills poor Suze)

Dragon Kim is driving her big black truck. The image becomes that of comic book art animation and narration starts to a blank screen and an image of what's going on.

NARRATION

Dragon Kim was born into a small gang in Chinatown, New York. She was trained to be a killer, if neccesary, and brought up with the mind of a mafia boss. When she came of age, she asked for an out. They denied her, knowing that if she did, she would possibly turn. She didn't plan to, quite frankly she just wanted to get out of the hell. She devised plans of escape. Each time she was found, each time she was ravaged. She'd tried only twice, but it was enough to lose her a lifetime of dignity and a couple fingers. So, she resorted to other means.

Dragon Kim is dressed in a black uniform while attacking each person with a painful stealth kill.

NARRATION

Though she was a trained assassin at that time, at nineteen, she didn't quite plan to use her skills. Especially not on who she did.

She turns around to see her mother. She holds out a gun. Her mother has a gun at her as well.

ZHEN MA

Please, honey, don't. You can't leave. As much as I love you, I will stand in your way. If I have to, I will kill you.

DRAGON KIM

The same.

ZHEN MA

Please! There are other ways. I don't want either of us to wind up doing something we'll regret.

DRAGON KIM

Me either, but I will have my way.

ZHEN MA

Please Ting!

DRAGON KIM

No. I'm sorry.

She aims, fires, shoots. Zhen dies. Dragon Kim begins to cry. She kisses her forehead, then leaves. We see Dragon Kim driving, "modern day" again. She gives a sarcastic grump and speeds up.

NARRATION

She did what she thought she had to do. That happened to include killing her mother. She left because she was tired of the blood and violence, when in reality it was the beginning of what she yearned.

DRAGON KIM'S, INT, DAY

JUDD enters, kicking the door down and holding a cocked gun at her, then shoots. He's wearing a business suit. She shoots him back right before he pulls out another gun and shoots it inches from her head.

JUDD

Wait, ho! I got two guns here and I will fire both into your fucking skull.

Judd sits next to her, holding both at her.

JUDD

What is all this shit I hear about you killing Suze?

DRAGON KIM

The truth. I don't have shit to explain to you.

JUDD

Yeah, yeah you do. See, I'm being nice here. I was sent to kill you so I should cap your ass right now- but first I want to know what the hell drove you to kill my sister.

DRAGON KIM

She went fucking missing. We're assassins, and I don't give a shit if she's your sister or that she went on a heroin binge. She left. We may have no rules, but in that situation we know what to do.

JUDD
Mmhmm. But what's your little bio? Didn't you leave your little Siamese clique and kill them all?

DRAGON KIM

First off, Taiwanese. Get your fucking races right. Second off, I had my reasons. If there had been a middle man like myself, that shit wouldn't have gone down.

JUDD

You hypocritical bitch.

DRAGON KIM

What the hell does that matter?

JUDD

Cause you killed my Suze and you didn't need to. No good reason. Man, if I wasn't sent to kill you I would have anyway.

DRAGON KIM

(laughing) I can kill whoever the fuck I want!

JUDD

Betcha can't kill me.

Dragon Kim shoots. He shoots back twice. She ducks , shoots three times, almost shot after the second and gets him in the head with the third. He twitches for a while.

DRAGON KIM

The sad thing is, you had two guns and more than enough time.

(Adds unncessary Taiwanese epithet)

She laughs again, then shoots him twice more.

ADOLPH'S, INT, DAY

ADOLPH

(on the phone)

Goddamn that bitch! She killed him.

REIZO

Yep. Left his fucking brains painted all over the place.

ADOLPH

You know I need this from you. I know you're not afraid.

REIZO

Wouldn't know you if I was. See you when I do.

They both hang up. Adolph punches the table.

ADOLPH

He better get this done.

Author's Note: Suspense much? Let me know how much you enjoyed this. Butter me up. PLEASE? just kidding...but leave a good review.


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