tr a i ling kisses along your collar
bone & making wishes on every
(extruding/protruding/jutting/) rib

ii.

i lap up the oh-so divine s e c r e t s
emitting from your sterile(ized) veins
sacred sacrifices, just sacred sacrifice

iii.

your bones are crystallized remnants of a
cosmic collision--so beautiful, beautiful

iv.

:you, my love, are my (moon) child.