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Hey there! This is just another poem I've come up with in ten minutes or less I suppose. I was actually writing this while watching the American Idol finale yesterday (at least yesterday here in the Philippines), so my attention was more concentrated on the TV than the poem. But I thought it turned out ok.... Yeah right.
So anyways, read and enjoy!
HUES ON CANVAS
by Eyes of Amethyst
Painted is my life on canvas
Filled with different hues
Each and all so different
What colors did I use?
Vibrant were for happy days
Yellow, orange, red
To symbolize those smiles of mine
And all the bliss it led
Faded were those forlorn times
When I felt so alone
That of colors black and grey
I once stood sadly on my own
And there were hues that clashed so much
It symbolized my rage
With blue was orange, red was green
Collided hues on one lone page
I felt the fear emitting from
The colors dipped in fear
Shivering; so terrified
Of all that’s daunting near
And of course the hues of love
Was spread among the rest
Mysterious yet obvious
I welcomed it with zest
And last, not least, was that of hope
Shining brightest of all
For it will be forever there
Until the day we fall
Looking at my life I smile
It seemed so large and vast
Despite the ups and downs I’ve faced
My canvas’s filled at last
Anyways, reveiws are welcome and constructive criticism is appreciated. Sorry if the above paragraph seemed like a lecture or something, but I just wanted to clear that up.