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Author: The One To Rule Them All
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Humor/Mystery - Reviews: 3 - Published: 05-31-05 - Updated: 06-23-05 - id:1926943

A/N: Thanks for the reviews ppl!

Dedications: Dedicated to all my mates at school!


Chapter 3- Jennifer-Rose, you're a genius!

Jennifer-Rose had been looking at the body, taking DNA samples and other sciency stuff like that. She then discovered something great.

She ran into the case room holding a piece of paper.

"I've identified the body!" Jennifer-Rose shouted waving the paper around, "His name is Sean Hughes,"

"Great!" Amanda said, "We can finally add something to our board!"

She grabbed a marker pen and scribbled the name up beside the picture of the guy.

"Muahahahaha!" Linsey laughed, "We've got something!"

"Hallelujah praise the lord!" Aidan praised,

Paul walked in (for a change).

"Ah ha!" He exclaimed, "You've got something!"

"Yeah!" Amanda aid happily, "We do indeed,"

Just then a frying pan came crashing through the window.

"LINSEY LOOK OUT!" Amanda yelled, pushing Linsey out of the way.

They stood up and looked out the window, and there in front of them stood a cloaked figure.

They just stood there but then slowly turned away and swept off into the shadows.

There was a note on the frying pan.

"Another note!" Jennifer-Rose whispered,

She picked it up and everyone huddled around it.

I may not have caught you now,

But watch out because one day

You're going to end up like the

Rest of them!

Yes you

Linsey Millar…

Everyone looked at Linsey.

There was an awkward silence once again.

"Right," Amanda said finally, "I want 24 hour police guards around Linsey, she must never be alone! Do you hear me?"

"Yes ma'am!" everyone replied,

Everyone was now in a right flap. Running around the place, speaking like budgies on the phone or ordering the police guards around.

Amanda and Linsey slumped down onto their chairs.

"Something tells me this is going to be a long day," Amanda sighed,

"I agree," Linsey agreed,

Jennifer-Rose had been in her lab since the incident happened,

She burst into the case room.

"Whoa!" Amanda exclaimed, "What's up?"

Jennifer-Rose grinned,

"I've found the murderer's finger print on the frying pan!" She announced,

"JR you're a genius!" Linsey yelled.

"Yeah," Jennifer-Rose said, "I know,"

Just then, another colleague called Kirstin came in.

"Hey guys!" She said, "I just got the call. So there's been a murder you say?"

"Yep and JR has just managed to get the murderers fingerprints!" Linsey smiled.

They went on to tell Kirstin all that had happened.

"Poor you Linsey!" Kirstin said with sympathy,

"Thanks, but I can look after myself!" Linsey told them,

"Sorry but I can't help it!" Kirstin snapped, "I like to look out for my friends,"

"Yeah yeah ok, I forgive you," Linsey laughed,

Paul stomped in, obviously in a very bad mood.

"Hey Mr. Happy!" Aidan called, "We have great news!"

Paul glared.

"What," he snorted,

"I've found the murderer's finger prints on the frying pan!" Jennifer-Rose explained,

Paul's mood immediately lifted and he ACTUALLY smiled!

"Really?" he asked in awe,

"Yep! Now all we need to do now is match them!" Linsey said with a smile,

"But-" Jennifer-Rose started with a sigh,

"Don't tell me you can't match them!" Linsey pouted,

"Unfortunately no, we can't match them," Jennifer-Rose sighed,

"Great!" Amanda cried, "Just great! Hey wait a moment,"

Amanda looked outside the broken window.

"Look at those footprints!" She went on to explain, "They're by the make Goldigga, and you can only buy it in one store in the Oak Mall, Original Shoe Co."


Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed this chapter!

Fourth one will be up soon.

Please review!



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