
| A Desperate Struggle
Author: Helare A desperate struggle between depression and the mind. 'Slowly engulfing, slowly' 'Then, suddenly its choking' 'A depression I'm not willing to free' 'And in the face of the world I don't feel'
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Angst/Horror - Words: 115 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 06-14-05 - id: 1939884
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A Desperate Struggle
Its a hated emotion
As it climbs its ladder
Slowly engulfing, slowly
Then, suddenly its choking
And tearing all in its path
A depression I'm not willing to free
And in the face of the world I don't feel
In its clouded might it will never lose
For nothing's left to win
Its taken everything I am
And for once its not sad
As it joins with my soul
Its hard to be, for its me.
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I certainly do like this one. Not too sure about the format or ending though. :shrugs: It is what it is, and that's all it'll ever be. Hope you enjoyed.
-exile
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