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Detest thy Enemies
My chest is closing in again
I’ve been patient for way too long
My hatred is consuming me again
Hide from me please
Don’t let my detest reach you
I am the one getting scared for your sake
When my hatred smells you out
I can’t promise I won’t make a mistake
And if destiny frown upon you
And my hand makes its way through your throat
I’ll be happier if you could fight back
I don’t want to show pity to you
But even if you did fight back
I don’t see me loosing to you right now
I’ll find bliss giving you pain
I’ll find content in your shame
I’m not asking for your apology
I don’t intend to find a better way
The time you find your way to your hell
Will be the happiest of my day
This is my first attempt on a poem, which falls into the category of Angst, I’m not sure how I did but it sure fired me up writing this kind of poem. Anyway, you’ll be the judge on how I did. Constructive criticisms are very welcomed.