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Senses of the Dead
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TheBrokenWanderer PM
just read it...and review it...that's all i ever ask...i'm trying to review as many people as i can that review me...but i'm rather busy...but i'll get around to you, i promise...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Words: 81 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 07-13-05 - id: 1962155
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"He's been shot"

Is all I hear

As all sound fades from my ears

A mask, a scalpel

Is all I see

As the darkness swallows me

Frozen steel

Is all I feel

As I slowly cease to know what's real

Copper bile

Is all I taste

As my heartbeat dissipates

Soap and bleach

Is all I smell

As I begin descent into my Hell

Sorrow, regret

Is all I sense

As my life fades into the past-tense

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