
just read it...and review it...that's all i ever ask...i'm trying to review as many people as i can that review me...but i'm rather busy...but i'll get around to you, i promise...
Rated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Words: 81 - Reviews: 13 - Favs: 1 - Published: 07-13-05 - id: 1962155
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"He's been shot"
Is all I hear
As all sound fades from my ears
A mask, a scalpel
Is all I see
As the darkness swallows me
Frozen steel
Is all I feel
As I slowly cease to know what's real
Copper bile
Is all I taste
As my heartbeat dissipates
Soap and bleach
Is all I smell
As I begin descent into my Hell
Sorrow, regret
Is all I sense
As my life fades into the past-tense
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