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Quiet Thoughts
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I walk along the broken tiles
That lead predictably away from the gate
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The clouds are sharp blossoms of watercolour
Pressed primly against an indifferent washed-out sky
Blue seeping into a half-hearted yellow glow
It drizzles
Just enough
Warm droplets hanging like
milky static in the air
Restless, sizzling just beyond the edge of my vision
Psychedelically clear outlines
A gritty pixilated photo
Everything feels on edge in
The cranky whispering of the impatient afternoon
-- setting hurriedly on itself
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Time lulls and my senses dull
A mocking haze drifting
Over that subtle sense of unease
And I watch
As shades of humanity flicker by
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The bus stop seat feels hard beneath me
-- I wonder what train drivers see when
They rush by a drooping rainbow of passengers
Clamouring silently
To go home
That raindrop hanging from the roof
Scorns laughingly
And I sit in slow torture as it grows fuller and fuller
Taking a split-second eternity
Before driving itself freeze-frame by frame
Into the grit-scrubbed pavement
A skipped beat away
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Then the vehicles restart their sweet grinding melody
In my ears once more
Traffic sounding so smoothly oiled --
The trees have broken out of their thick stupor
And are waving gently in the
Now present breeze
That gracefully soothes the restless buzzing
Heart of the city
Hot fading tenderly into cool
The changed sky glows sweetly golden
Blending subtly the patient hues of purple and blue
Flowing serenely together
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I marvel.. evening has set!
In that tiny moment when the whole world collectively
Holds its breath
Then lets it all out again in a
Gentle whoosh
As the city slowly grinds down to sleep.
-- I feel as if I just missed that moment – like it was something
I should have treasured
But did not
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And it is a wry smile that curves my lips
While I drink in the reassuring beauty of it all
-- Stepping up into the waiting bus --
Allowing another day to reach
Its own perfectly flawed ending.
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A/N: Yay! I miss writing so much... well I'm glad I'm updating. It was what I thought some days ago on my way home from school... I wanted to describe the startling, subtle shift from afternoon to evening, and the marvelous change in atmosphere that went along with it... I suppose I was in a reflecting mood! Well, please review and tell me what you think! (Eyes unclouded: I thought about your colon remark and decided to edit it a little…:))