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She was
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She was wearing black clothes// don't knock it until you've read it. (then knock it.)
Rated: Fiction K - English - Romance - Words: 90 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 07-18-05 - id: 1965701
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She was

She was wearing black clothes,

Including a black coat with hood,

Which didn't quite cover her black hair

Which dangled in front of her eyes

(Which were circled with black)

and staring at me.

And as our eyes met,

I realised that they were the most beautiful blue eyes

I'd ever seen.

-fine-

wow. So much repetition I wanna slap myself. Tis a bit annoying isn't it.

Any way please review yadda yadda yadda…It'll only take a sec.

Luv R x x x

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