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Control
LadyNel

The night brings darkness
With darkness, comes terror
Fear seeps through me
I know he's here
Watching me
Waiting for me

He will come for me
He always does
Takes control of my dreams
Of my heart
Of my very emotions
He's the contorller of my fear
Him, not me

And I am afraid
As he wills it
Once he knows I'm to the point
Of dying of fright,
He leaves me
Simply vanishes,
Leaving shadows on my walls
To haunt me Remind me,
That he controls me

But he will be back
He is always lingering
Will always come back
Back with the darkness
That forever controls my life