
| This Ocean of Red
Author: backseats on thursdays Last few moments of life... and all I can see... is your face. Written along side the awesome dayofwisdom. Working Title.
Rated: Fiction T - English - Tragedy/Angst - Words: 397 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 07-30-05 - id: 1974574
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Well, as I said in the summary, written by the lovely dayofwisdom and myself. Now, as I also said in the summary: Read an' find out!
Enjoy.
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All that's left here... as I lay dying...
in the ocean of red surrounding me with its waves...
is the fragile thread of my sanity....
The very fibers that I once held on to... have perished before my eyes...
my very eyes and heart.
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What is left here isn't nothing
when it comes to the ocean of blacks and blues
it is a subtle reminder of my sanity
the strings that pull my world... the strings have left my sight
The sight of what is nothing
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I could have been alive. Everything could have been amazing.
Life could have gone... perfectly, but it turned to ruins....
Winds... winds that swell over me in unmerciful pain.
Gusts that became known to me as my tormentor,
Tormentor of memory.
You ruined everything.
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Everything, that is, but this growing silent prosperity
this tranquility deep within these wounds
life... or the mere beauty that stings the blood
waves that attempt to wash me clean... for forever
forever, that is, in my heart
the heart that was yours.
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Here, slowly dwindling away, waiting patiently for the end,
the pool of metallic red grows larger, and a picture of you, looms it's way into my mind.
Your eyes... they bore through me, rendering me speechless....
Rendering me silent, until I saw you laughing...
At me.
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You found it... funny.
How I miserably I lived my life -- living day to day -- hoping for a cure.
But I never knew... I was too naïve to see it otherwise.
I was too blind,
to see you with a knife at my back.
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And now I am, without the waters
That at one point sustained my common sense
Whatever blood you have destined for me I must now take
For with these eyes I see naught but a pool of darkness
A pool that you thrust me into… Mercifully
But without mercy.
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Till next time....
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