
Have you ever waited for someone and you felt like you have been waiting for eternity? Yeah, that's what I'm trying to say, so R&R, okay?
Rated: Fiction T - English - Poetry - Words: 220 - Reviews: 5 - Published: 08-02-05 - id: 1976579
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Bored
By kenishiro
Date written: 25/07/05
(Man, it's been a while since my last submission, thoughduring that time, I did not completely stop writing, in fact I've written constantly. The only differene between my last submission of poem up till now, I think that I have totally broaden my view on life, on how to accepct it, how to resolve it, how tocope and try tounderstand it. Yeah, I'm hoping that you guys can see the difference... so read and review, guys, thanx, smell yer later..)
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Bored
How to console
Such an unsettle soul
Waiting for the time to roll
Bored
With nothing to do
And not a single clue
How to get rid of this blue
Waiting
For time to give a meaning
And not end up with nothing
Well, at least for the time being
Drag
Feels like my head's about to crack
Waiting for such a lag
Yet nothing gives back
"Jeezz"
I hope this boredom would cease
And put my mind at ease
Make my life a peace
"Dum da dum!"
My savior finally comes
I know, because she hums
Make my heart beats like a drum
Finally
I'll begin my date cheerfully
My boredom ends finally
As we walk happily
Feedback: Yes, please. Constructive criticism appreciated as well.
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