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Author: kingcarnidge
Fiction Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Adventure - Reviews: 10 - Published: 08-06-05 - Updated: 01-29-06 - id:1979655

How could this of happened? How had this tragedy come about? Why was it happening? How could he let everyone he had cared about down because of her. When she clearlyknew she was NOT going to die. Her and her friends, her colleges, all stood amazed at the sight before them. Finally she let her pain surface.

“HOW COULD YOU!! YOU’VE MURDERED!!! U HAVE DESTROYED COUNTLESS ENTIRETIES!!! WHY!?! I LOVE YOU!!! I LOVED YOU!!” she yelled as pain struck tears rolled down her cheeks. He stood there, tall, as flames erupted all around him. His face was emotionless, relaxed. His hair along with his long black woollen robe, swayed in the strong yet deadly breeze. Finally his father stepped forward. Hate mixed with utter regret clear in his eyes. The betrayer turned his gaze towards his father, his relaxed expression now gone.

“YOU!! YOU LIED TO ME!! ALL THESE YEARS YOU USED ME!!” The betrayer yelled rather insanly.

“I have not lied to you. Your new master has lied to you! Everyone here cares about you!! Cant you see that!!” The father yelled as much as he could. The boy/betrayer paced up and down, giving his father the most sidinacal look he had.

“LIAR!!” his voice echoed throught the cave they were surrounded by. His father shook his head disbelievingly.

“you were not only my son, but my friend!! You were the last person on this earth I would expect to do this!! WHY!!!”

“MY MASTER HAS TOLD ME THE TRUTH ABOUT YOUR PLANS FOR ME!!! THAT’S WHY YOU WERE ALWAYS TELLING ME WOT TO DO!!! SO YOU COULD SCULP MY POWER TO YOUR PURPOSES!!!”

“Yes!! BUT ONLY BECAUSE THIS WOULD HAPPEN IF I DIDN’T!! CLEARLY YOU NEVER PAYED ATTENTION TO ME OR ANYONE HERE!!!. . .”
”DON’T TALK SUCH NONSENSE!! ALL I EVER WANTED TO DO WAS HELP!! MY ADVICE WAS NEVER LISTENED TO!! THE PEOPLE I CARED ABOUT DIED OR GOT HURT INFRONT OF ME!! MY OWN GRANDFATHER WAS MY ENEMY!! NOW THIS KINGDOM WILL BE MINE!! AND IT SHALL RULE TRIUMPHANTLY!” The father shook his head disappointingly.

“And what of your wife, your daughter! What will become of them”

“They will live, all because of me! And what I have done!”

“WHAT YOU HAVE DONE IS DESTROY EVERYTHING YOU FOUGHT FOR!!”

“TO SAVE THE PEOPLE THAT I LOVE!!”

“well then it has come to this james” the father said in a regretfull manner. He egnited his sabor. The son did the same. They pounced of the ground towards each other, screaming terrible screams. How did this happen? Shana thought to herself. A father and a son, hitting, beating and trying to destroy the other. James kicked his father stomach and swung at him with his sabor, Paul ducked just dodging it and uppercut his son. Shana shook her head as she began to cry. The betrayers sister stepped forward also crying.

“STOP IT!!! YOUR FLESH AND BLOOD!!! YOU’RE MY FLESH AND BLOOD!!! STOP! STOP COME BACK!!” no-one listened to her. Shana turned her gaze towards the duelling fighters. How did this happen? . . .


this chapter is more of a prologue, the rest of the chapter will be leading up to this to show how it happened and go further to show how it ends. This is also the shortest chapter. Ive changed the names because of a review i got, so this way everyones happy. Enjoy the story



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