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Before You Read, Be Aware...
This is all very
episodic, the POV changes quite frequently, and the plot hasn't been
outlined into a bloody pulp. Why? This isn't a big project of mine.
It's a fun little thing to write on to as well as an excercize in
characters, but everyone who's read this has really enjoyed, so I'm
hoping to spread the love here. If you're looking for something very
serious, with a big purpose and theme and all that whatnot, turn
elsewhere. But if you can deal with a bit of meandering and a few corny
scenes, with some nice descriptions and characters and m/m goodness
scattered along the way, check it out.
That in mind, this is the one
thing I'm not looking for heavy criticisms on; this is purely intended
as fun for me and the readers (hopefully they'll enjoy.
POV will be
provided at the beginning of each scene for sheer clarity's sake. If
you still don't get it, well, tough cookies; this thing ain't going
through the Revise-o Machine again.
Also, this is a censored version, as some content is not allowed on FictionPress due to sexuality. If you're interested in the full version, there's a link at the end of mah userinfo.