
Not my usual norm, but I'd very much appreciate some feedback and comments. Read the A/N inside, it'll help. =D R+R
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 274 - Reviews: 6 - Published: 08-15-05 - id: 1986726
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The Rainstorm
A/N: I originally wrote this for a writing contest, and I'll admit that it isn't my norm, but I find it rather vivid and exotic, in a sense.
Musky aromas, heavy in scent
Surround the land
To the distance
An army is coming
An army of silvers and grays
To parade upon the land
And cover the earth
In fleeting darkness
It comes
Gray's and silver's take over
The red's and gold's of
A late evening sunset
The air is heavy
Heavy with the scent of a storm
Closing around you
And taking you in
Silver clouds surround
The golden sun, blocking it
Shadows, eerie and forbidding,
Are cast upon the murky street
And the shadows grow
It starts
Softly, at first,
The first drops fall
They tickly the rivers
Creating small ripples
And casting a light dew
Upon the smallest of plants
It grows
Turning into a steady drizzle
Upsetting the oceans
Forming unadorned puddles
Only so big enough
To fit a child's wandering hand
It climaxes
Pouring down like a dark sheet
Raging against the
Tightly drawn curtains
A ceaseless rhythm
Pounds into
The storm's watchers
Trees bend and ache
In the erupting wind
Wind whistles through grass
Grass becomes slick and smooth
And the steady beat continues
It is finished
Clouds tear
Revealing the setting sun
Soft gold's are cast upon the warm gray's
The shadows leave with the army
Children stomp in the lasting puddles
Plants glisten with dew
That familiar, heavy scent becomes
And fills your body like the warming sun
While the army leaves
Victorious
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