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Love what is your reaction
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Munchin PM
These two poems I wrote are a reflection I had on the topic of love after something happened to someone I love. The last is not really poem but more a song of sorts. yeah it would be nice if someone would read it and comment. Thanks!
Rated: Fiction M - English - Poetry - Chapters: 3 - Words: 449 - Reviews: 15 - Updated: 09-03-05 - Published: 08-19-05 - id: 1989104
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When you love someone

you should be willing to give up something

time, thought, feelings

there must be a balance

or else it is abuse

You take advantage of someones kindness

they ask why or just accept it

because they realize that

this is wrong or don't want to give up

on hope

that way you'll change

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