Author: sarah1491 PM
Poem about how it's nice to have a friend there for you whenever you may need them. Please R&R!Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 167 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 09-11-05 - id: 2005160
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Always there, by my side,
Always there to depend on.
Always there when I need a friend,
Always there to hug.
Always there to give advice,
Always there to understand.
Always doing the best you can,
To help a friend in need.
I added the "Always" at the beginning of almost every line, I just thought it might make the poem a bit interesting! I know it's not much, I just like writing light poems that have a true meaning in them; but I haven't ever written a really deep poem yet. I'm just thinking about it though. Please R&R. :) Your compliments & constructive criticism always counts! I like that bit of extra help. I just ask from you, that if you don't like my poem(s), just tell me why, and possibly how I could write differently. Don't just say: "I hate this poem." I like to read your reviews!