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Alright, these are just four poems I wrote for a school project. The only one I REALLY like is "Assassin" and I hate the last one...and the first one bothers me a bit...but "Golden Eyes" is pretty good...Well, I wanna know what you guys think. I'm not really poetic so the fact that I could write four poems in two days is like...amazing.
Jewels and Secrets
The feasting table’s set with porcelain
I see his jewel sparkling round his hand.
I have to wonder where this Prince has been.
He moves with purpose making clear demands.
It seems as though the dishes want to serve
Him dinner from his place across from me.
Near him I think that I will lose my nerve
To keep this secret trusted in to me.
The jewel glitters dangerously bright
Its color is revealed for all to see
It’s shown to be one of the blackest night
Though on her finger rests the Ebony.
This dark pair cannot hold my tongue for long
I must depart before my secret’s known.
He lifts his wings
And greets the night sky
His bladed staff
Reflects the light
Shining from his golden eyes.
The Ebon-grey glints
Around his neck
On a golden chain
Reflecting his strength
Matching the shine in is golden eyes.
His tortured soul
Rests in the wind
That licks at his face
As he closes his eyes
To savor the night,
Those finally content golden eyes.
Glittering in the dawn’s light
The stiletto in her hand
Seeks a victim.
Shining like her gold-green eyes
The Jewel round her throat
Seeks a victim.
Slender fingers
Wrapped around his neck
Seek new victims.
Sarcasm
The outlet of her frustration
Wit
The way she gets back at you
For thinking she’s “just a girl”
Ice
The expression in
Her hard blue eyes
Fear
The yearning in her heart
Love
For her only family left
that isn’t her blood at all.
Trust
In her strong and beautiful Queen.
Ties
That bind her feelings together
And make her
The Self she is.
Thoughts? Suggestions?