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I keep altering this poem, and I'm not sure if I'm completely happy with it yet, but I thought I'd put it up and see what people think! Let me know your thoughts, if you don't mind. Thanks.
Gravestones and Spider silk
I pause outside the walls
Uncertain
Tentatively stepping forwards
I immerse myself in the world of stones
The air of constant stillness envelops me
In the noise of silence
And the sadness of the loss overwhelming
Running
my fingers along the weather-smoothed stone
And reading the messages written with love
upon the hearts of the deceased.
They touch mine.
Between two stones, glimmering with fragility
A tightrope stretched from grief to remembrance
A brave explorer
Swaying perilously on a whisper-thin lifeline
Builds hope from despair
And I know:
Even though they can be broken so easily
We still build our dreams on shards of light...