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AN:Here are two poims (yes poims...and poimtry!) i wrote...there's a poetry slam next Wednesday? Which one should I read? And by the way...are they good? :-)
(not a dis)Claimer: These are my original poims...I WROTE THEM!!!
Love if Beauty
A Pretty Face
A coaxing voice
That's all we ever see
The tales we spin
That we've found true love
When in reality we don't know his name
We watch our dream from afar
Too scared to get close
For fear of sheer rejection and misery
Why are we afraid to discover
If an ounce of love is there
If there's a journey in our future
Why do we fall head over heels
Over something we don't know
Judging the present by its wrapper
We don't know his personality
We don't know his name
But we've sold our heart to him
The unnamed object of love
A journey on a broken path
When we choose to follow our heart
Instead of our intuition
To go with our feelings
Instead of what we know is right
To let our ignorant blindness take over
If you follow your heart
It will surely break
For nothing lasts forever
To follow your heart
Is a big mistake
Its wreckless; far from safe
We're all afraid of getting hurt
We're all afraid of pain
But a broken heart can the be the most
rewarding thing
When somebody comes to heal it
AN:kk? Good bad? INPUT PLEASE!!! XD