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AN: silentescape (I did take a break from writing... I'm actually really working on two books that I plan on finishing completely before I post them.) yourxtuesday (Thanks! I know, it's a short one, and I could have lengthened it. Writing is rewriting, right? You never know, I'll probably rewrite it into a more 'novelish' type story in the future) JC-Saved-Me (About the publishing, I doubt that will happen. But a girl's allowed to dream, right? Thanks!) KimHua (Not many people have stuck to Autumn's Beginning all the way to the end! I'm surprised! I don't blame them for not wanting to sit in front of the computer reading a novel-sized story on the internet for hours... thanks! Oh, in the epilogue, I should have put something bigger about Lauren in there. It's in Michael's paragraph. He'd become a believer, and was now good friends with Lauren, I believe. Yeah, that's true, they did get pretty close to dating in those weeks before she became a Christian. I'm not so sure about dating a non-believer, either. From what I've heard--and it may not be much--those sort of relationships only end in heartbreaks. So, before I'm writing my own novel in my author's note, I'd better say thank you and God Bless!)
There once sat two hills
With a valley between
And if one would look
Two camps could be seen
Once camp on one hill
And one on the other
As a battle raged on
Between one another
Now, the camp on the north
Could master them all
They had a champion
Over nine feet tall!
The giant took to taunting
The south camp all day:
“Come out, little weasels!
Come out and come play!”
No Israelite challenged
The big Philistine champ
No warrior was brave enough
To depart from their camp
But then came young David
Our hero, saving the day
The leaders and the soldiers
Could do nothing but pray
As David challenged the giant
With no armor or sword
Only a slingshot and stones
He drew his strength from the Lord
Goliath just laughed
As he saw the young boy
Thinking he’d just crush him
Like he’d step on a toy
The spectators grew quiet
As on Goliath laughed
David readied his slingshot
Was the boy simply daft?
Up went the stone!
Israel’s hope with it
All eyes turned skyward
Until the rock hit
The onlookers gasped:
“Goliath’s forehead!”
Would Israel’s enemy
Turn out to be dead?
David stepped back
‘Til the rock took its toll
Goliath stood still
His eyes began to roll
With a dramatic thump!
The giant fell forward
The Philistines groaned
Their eyes filled with horror
Their sighs were hopeless
Their glares were heated
For each one of them knew
That they’d been defeated