Author: AbstractMind PM
very short...me and a friend were messing around going back and forth writing a line to get a general idea for a poem...This is what I turned it in toRated: Fiction T - English - Words: 81 - Published: 10-22-05 - id: 2033073
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Lost in this wild new land
Intimidating and unfamiliar faces press down upon her
As she tries to find her way among the unknown,
But feel the current is too strong and forcing her further downstream.
She slips farther down but is offered not an outstretched hand to grasp.
Consuming her is this black twister;
Drowning in her tears
Made up of her fears and doubts.
She feels herself dying inside
As she struggles to keep her head above the surface.