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Vampire: I actually made this poem around last month in English, but I wanted to post it anyway. Also, it might be hard to keep up with cos, like I said, I made it in English when were reading Romeo and Juliet.
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Title: Betrayal Equals PainGenre: Angst/Drama
Rating: G
Summary: A poem about something that happened with two friends and me
Notes/Warnings: Only that ’twas means ‘it was.’
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When ’twas I that was deceived,
I was unsure of what to think.
Then ’twas then that I retrieved,
My broken heart that had began to sink.
Two persons long thought they did not betray,
The friend that had brought them forward to love.
This friend – ’twas I! – did not suspect they may,
Leave me out like a sad, broken dove.
I had suspected that this may be so,
But not that they’d cause so much hurt,
And that I would have them as a large foe;
And that they would shove my heart into the dirt.
But now I should think that I am okay,
However, when I speak to them...
...What shall I say?
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Vampire: Yes, it’s not my best piece of work. I was rather depressed when I wrote it, too, so...Yes. Anyway, please review and au revoir.