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Sestina I wrote a few years ago and found while on a random folder organizing attack . . . it’s rather pretty, and I adore sestinas . . . think ‘m going to write another one soon . . . ah well, enjoy the lovely river in the moonlight! And reviews are nice. ARRGGH. Some body tell me how to make the damn editing create spaces between stanzas . . . it keeps deleteing them and really it's really pissing me off . ..
Moonlight on the River
Peering out from the shadows
A cold silent river
Flows, lit by moonlight
Reveling in its silence.
Like cold fingered hands, mist
Swells up from the murky depths of grey.
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The hands move along, muting everything to grey.
Not a sound comes from those within the shadows
As they are swallowed up by mist
Which comes creeping from the frigid river.
All around is silence
Untouched, save for the moonlight.
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The river seems to brighten, lit by moonlight
Fading back to grey.
Those hidden sit in silence
Staring out of the shadows
At the sinuous river
Overflowing with mist.
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The hands of the mist
Twine about the pure shafts of moonlight
Reflected on the river
Driving away the grey
From the deep shadows.
The river sits in silence.
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The light shines down in silence
Penetrating the mist.
It lightens the shadows,
Pooling upon the ground. Moonlight
Brings light to the grey
And shines down into the river
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Mist continues rising into the night off the river
Seeping into the woods in silence.
A soft blanket of grey
Descends upon the forest, the mist
Dancing in the moonlight,
Lying hidden in the shadows.
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Shafts of moonlight descend into silence
Blanketed by the grey tendrils of mist
The light off of the river fades into the shadows.