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Author: fish bowl life
Fiction Rated: M - English - Angst/Tragedy - Reviews: 10 - Published: 12-11-05 - Updated: 02-24-06 - id:2067156

SORRY GUYS!! I know this is a little sketchy, and the red red krovvy, you had good points I was just in a bitchy mood I’m sorry. I love you all, all like, 5 of you that are reading this. I went back and changed a lot, and added a lot. So when I’m done (and I’ll tell you) you should go back and reread. it might clarify some (I hope it does, its going to take forever to redo). The only reason I didn’t explain so much is I didn’t have a clear idea of what was going to happen, and because I based everyone in here off a real person so I already know what they’re like. This is my first real full-length story so I apologize for incompleteness and any other issues there might be. Please review if you have any other suggestions and whatnot… I’m going to redo the rest of the story before I add any more new chapters so . . . no more story till I’m done.

When you live in a world deadened by mental abstraction, you don't sense the aliveness of the universe anymore.
-Eckhart Tolle



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