
A poem about a girl who can't stop crying cuz her bf is leaving and wants to travel the world. Inspired by 'the last goodbye' by atomic kitten. review plz?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 146 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-12-05 - id: 2067624
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Slipping Tears
Don't worry...this isn't true. Just something inspired by the song 'The Last Goodbye' by ATOMIC KITTEN. Not very good, I'm afraid, but that's for you to judge...review plz?
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Tears are slipping down my cheeks,
And I can't hold them back,
Turned away from you I hide them,
But tonight, I just can't find that knack,
At hiding my troubles from you,
And acting like everything's alright,
It seems like secrets are slipping,
And my control's disappearing tonight,
I don't wanna say goodbye again,
Feel the loneliness without you,
Everything's losing its' taste,
Luck is far between and few.
I don't wanna cage you,
And stop you from living your dreams,
But still my tears keep slipping,
And my hands clutch at your very seams,
I don't wanna let you go...
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