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Slipping Tears
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A poem about a girl who can't stop crying cuz her bf is leaving and wants to travel the world. Inspired by 'the last goodbye' by atomic kitten. review plz?
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Poetry/Romance - Words: 146 - Reviews: 12 - Published: 12-12-05 - id: 2067624
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Slipping Tears

Don't worry...this isn't true. Just something inspired by the song 'The Last Goodbye' by ATOMIC KITTEN. Not very good, I'm afraid, but that's for you to judge...review plz?

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Tears are slipping down my cheeks,

And I can't hold them back,

Turned away from you I hide them,

But tonight, I just can't find that knack,

At hiding my troubles from you,

And acting like everything's alright,

It seems like secrets are slipping,

And my control's disappearing tonight,

I don't wanna say goodbye again,

Feel the loneliness without you,

Everything's losing its' taste,

Luck is far between and few.

I don't wanna cage you,

And stop you from living your dreams,

But still my tears keep slipping,

And my hands clutch at your very seams,

I don't wanna let you go...

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