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This is a special kind of poem called a two-voice poem, and to be enjoyed it has to be read the proper way, and the effect is best when you have someone else to read it with you. There are two differentvoice speaking in this poem. Onevoice is very feeling, very two, who's verses are italicized, is a tough guy, the kind of person who pushes their emotions way deep down and tries to keep everything they feel hidden inside. The catch is both voices belong to the same person, they are their inner voices and they conflict.
To read this poem, read from left to right. (Note: Ordinarily this type of poem would be spaced with voice 1 on theleft hand side and voice2 on the right, but for some reason won't let me use the tab key) When you see two verses on the same line, those verses must be readsimotaniously (together). Example: I love you --> Its a lie --> I feel it deep inside --> Look how weak the little boy is --> Isn't he stupid?
If you have a second person reading with you, have them read only the text in italics.
I love you
It’s a lie
I feel it deep inside
Look how weak the little boy is
Isn’t he stupid?
I want to be close
Stay away
Don’t be weak
Come closer
Stay away
Safe inside
I’m so cold Its so cold
Out there
In here
You must be strong
I feel so tired
My eyes are burning
Ignore it
My hands are bleeding
Forget it
My legs are breaking Grit your teeth and bare it
Be strong
I feel me dying
Here alone in the dark
How these feelings pain me so How these feelings pain me so