
| making it's worriedwasted w o r d s
Author: Lost In Context chained to a silent/ (silently chained)/ a tongue to(o)/ (mute.) A mesh of strange styles with word re-arrangements and lots of parentheses.
Rated: Fiction K - English - Poetry - Words: 85 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 01-07-06 - id: 2085277
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making (it's) worried/wasted w o r d s
it does blackingly swirling
(swirling blackingly)
word confusioningly
my in mind
where
pretty almost-
(almost pretty)
birds (and) birds
with
words (and) words
f l y
(trapped they are though)
chained to a silent
(silently chained)
a tongue to(o).
(mute.)
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a (somewhat) explanation: this comes from reading e.e. cummings and other somewhat strange poetry here on fictionpress. i felt a mesh of these styles worked well to convey what this poem is like.
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