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Author: Ethereal Kisses
Fiction Rated: K - English - Horror/Angst - Reviews: 5 - Published: 01-15-06 - Updated: 01-15-06 - id:2090475

Disclaimer: I own this poem, and it comes entirely from my imagination. If this poem sounds like any other, it is purely coincidental.

Authors Note: I submit this poem for you to read. Please note that this poem is rated at T and you should decide whether to read it accordingly. For the people who read it please review when you’re finished.

AN: This is another one that I really like as well.


Cold Neutron


When she falls;

She falls hard.


And when there is hurt;

It sinks down through her,

Like a star-dusted obsidian that drops

Falling motionless through cold space.


The ghost is in her head,

Red eyes glaring holes

Through her twin black souls

Straight through her eyes,

Glaring at the world beyond.


If you listen closely,

Strain harder, harder, until

Your own beat

Screams in your blood,

Can’t you hear that?

The laughter, malignant personified,

At the very centre of her own

Innocent giggle?


Would you have known

Just to look at her

That inside, evil lives

Within good?


No need to bar the door,

Futile hope against the devil;

It’s already inside.


And what use is one foot within

The door that leads into your mind;

When it has always been inside?


It was born there, has lived there always.

Inside you. Part of you. It is you.


Where the freezing darkness of

Buried memories, half-forgotten

Half-remembered-half-imagined

Half-rewritten-half-hidden,

It, he, she, they – stand

Queuing for their chance.


Sometimes, its true,

We feel their pull, beautiful luring voices

Temptation as soothing grey tendrils

Just one chance to, just once – you understand,

Right? Just one last chance to give in? –

Let the refreshing ice venom wash over.


Engulfing you, watching as, like the

Dense neutron of stars far above,

You sink just like that stone of hurt.

Let them take control, for just a minute

Whilst you rest in peace.


The ghost is in her head.

The ghost is inside.

In your head.


Note: This is a One Shot poem, so please don’t expect me to continue and update. Please R & R to tell me what you think, I’d really appreciate it.

May blessings follow in your footsteps,

Ethereal Kisses



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