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My second poem I put up, and I think it kicks Dark Cloud's ass! It' s a lot happier than it, and I'm rather proud of it. I hope you guys get the message it shows and most importantly you guys will love it. So here it is!
As I walk through the valley floors,
Knowing where each step I take.
Following the blowing winds,
Being pushed by the heartbeats my heart makes.
My head held high.
A cocky girn on my face.
Thinking nothing could be bring me down,
With each step I take.
That's what I thought,
Until the winds stop blowing and my heart stopped beating.
I made the wrong step,
I should have never taked.
There I was at the edge of the world,
With a frown on my face,
Thinking what I have done.
Did I take the right step?
I closed my eyes,
And looked into my breathless heart.
Here I was,
At the edge of the world.
I walked very far,
With my head held high,
But now I'm stuck.
So is my journey over,
Just when it had began?
Should I stay, and sit on the edge of the world?
Or should I take a risk,
Just one step over?
I closed my eyes.
I was deep in thought.
I have come to a conclusion,
I have made my choice.
I looked over the edge,
With my twinkling eyes,
And I turned around,
And started to head back.
My head held low,
A frown on my face.
Walking away,
From the edge of the world.
I stopped.
I raised my head high with a cocky grin,
I turned and ran,
Back to the edge of the world.
I was taking a risk, I was taking the step!
I jumped off the edge,
Greeting the howling winds.
And my heart began to race,
As I fell with open arms.
No matter the risk to fufill my dream,
I will take the steps along with it.
So I fell from the edge of the world,
With my head held high,
And a cocky grin on my face.
I took a risk, I took a step,
And I was happier than ever before.
Wow, that turned out better than I thought. To be honest, this is my first time with a happy poem, I guess it was beginners luck, maybe! Anyways, review me and tell me what you guys think! Thanks and good luck with your ideas and stories, and stuff!