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Author: Neverending
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - General/Poetry - Reviews: 3 - Published: 01-17-06 - Updated: 01-17-06 - id:2092546

My second poem I put up, and I think it kicks Dark Cloud's ass! It' s a lot happier than it, and I'm rather proud of it. I hope you guys get the message it shows and most importantly you guys will love it. So here it is!

As I walk through the valley floors,

Knowing where each step I take.

Following the blowing winds,

Being pushed by the heartbeats my heart makes.

My head held high.

A cocky girn on my face.

Thinking nothing could be bring me down,

With each step I take.

That's what I thought,

Until the winds stop blowing and my heart stopped beating.

I made the wrong step,

I should have never taked.

There I was at the edge of the world,

With a frown on my face,

Thinking what I have done.

Did I take the right step?

I closed my eyes,

And looked into my breathless heart.

Here I was,

At the edge of the world.

I walked very far,

With my head held high,

But now I'm stuck.

So is my journey over,

Just when it had began?

Should I stay, and sit on the edge of the world?

Or should I take a risk,

Just one step over?

I closed my eyes.

I was deep in thought.

I have come to a conclusion,

I have made my choice.

I looked over the edge,

With my twinkling eyes,

And I turned around,

And started to head back.

My head held low,

A frown on my face.

Walking away,

From the edge of the world.

I stopped.

I raised my head high with a cocky grin,

I turned and ran,

Back to the edge of the world.

I was taking a risk, I was taking the step!

I jumped off the edge,

Greeting the howling winds.

And my heart began to race,

As I fell with open arms.

No matter the risk to fufill my dream,

I will take the steps along with it.

So I fell from the edge of the world,

With my head held high,

And a cocky grin on my face.

I took a risk, I took a step,

And I was happier than ever before.

Wow, that turned out better than I thought. To be honest, this is my first time with a happy poem, I guess it was beginners luck, maybe! Anyways, review me and tell me what you guys think! Thanks and good luck with your ideas and stories, and stuff!



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