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this isnt very good and doesnt flow i think. I was bored. Please gimme constructive criticism
Rated: Fiction K - English - Words: 79 - Reviews: 3 - Published: 02-02-06 - id: 2103886
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Silence has its own sound
It has drowned many
A seething, frothing emptiness
Withering away the hope
What do you know???
Six words can bring you down
The vast emptiness can lose you
Completely
What is this void so lacking in?
What makes it worse than noise?
How is it so powerful
That it just destroys?
Doesn't it wonder?
Doesn't it make you think?
I hate silence, it tortures
Makes you curl up inside yourself
And shrink.
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